Snip, snip, snip went my scissors as I cut six-inch squares from my son’s old clothes. He was eighteen months old and I was pregnant with my second child. We collected sixty squares over a couple of months. I was going to make a baby quilt. But ...
I enrolled in my first writing class – writing for children. And I loved it. After years of doing science and scientific writing, it felt good to return to my childhood dream of becoming a writer. I wrote stories about my son, our cats and my childhood. And the six-inch squares lay in a box. All sewing came to a standstill.
After the course was finished, I made an apron from those squares for my son’s second birthday. He deserved one for being such a good helper (he still is). I was heavy with child. Two months later, I gave birth to a ten pound baby girl.
Pure happiness. Pure tiredness.
For six months, I wrote only grocery lists. Sleep became a high priority. Then I began to flex my writing muscles.
My teacher had said, “Write what you know.” So I wrote a short story about a little boy and his mother who cut up six inch squares from old clothes that don’t fit anymore. The boy receives a quilt on his birthday. My first version was longer, with details. But I pared the story down to its bare bones, about one hundred words. After reading it over I thought it would make a good rebus (story with pictures to help the beginning reader) so I submitted it as such to Ladybug.
Four months later, on a sunny Saturday afternoon, my SASE arrived. I expected another rejection. I had submitted about fifteen stories to various magazines that I enjoyed reading and they had all been returned, some with a form letter, others with a note of encouragement scribbled on them.
I ripped open the envelope and unfolded the letter. It said, “Thank you for sending Six Inch Squares for our consideration ...” and I thought, Oh, a personal rejection letter. But by the end of the first paragraph I felt my grin spread across my face as I read, “ ... I’m happy to tell you that we would like to accept it for publication in Ladybug. This is a wonderful presentation of old things begetting new memories.”
Waving my acceptance letter, I ran to the backyard where my family was picking the last of the blackberries, shouting, “An acceptance! An acceptance!” I got blackberry kisses. Later we had a celebratory reading of Six Inch Squares.
My children still don’t have a home-made quilt with all their favorite pieces of clothing. But they’ll get to read my story in print instead!
Six-Inch Squares has been published in the Oct. 2005 issue of Ladybug with darling illustrations by Sylvia Long.
What is a rebus?
A rebus is a picture puzzle originating from ancient Egypt and hieroglyphics, which by the sounds of their words suggests words or phrases. For example: Johnny Carson = jaw + knee + car + sun. These are fun, but for children learning to read, a rebus is not meant to be a pun, but a tool.
Ladybug substitutes pictures for concrete nouns within the sentence. An illustration shows the key. Highlights for Children has a picture next to the noun. Generally a rebus has 5-10 picturable words that are repeated a couple of times in a very, very short (75-125 words) and satisfying story.
"The Unfinished Quilt" was first published in August 2004 issue of Kid Magazine Writers.
6 comments:
No quilt, but the quilt story made it!
Maybe now, with first-born so grown, go back to the quilt?...
Such a sweet story. I love those rebus tales!
Mirka, I figured a quilt story is better than no quilt at all. Alas, I wish I enjoyed sewing more because it's so useful, and esp. now with today's dreadful fashions. But I admire my sister and friends who've sewed beautiful clothes for me and the children.
Katie, thank you. Rebuses are fun and they are such a great help for kids. Once they become fluent, they like to make their own.
I haven't read the story yet, but your post makes me want to. So warm and inviting.
Fun story!
Thanks Johnell and Barb.
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